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Oct. 9th, 2021 01:25 amThere's a version of Hallelujah (not done by LC, for reasons that will shortly become obvious) that I really really like except for one thing: he very clearly enunciates "you". Which ruins the rhyme--
(lol I should be asleep)
you start with words, snd then some more,
then others wander through the door,
and then you have a line that ends in ooh-yuh
that third line there, the yuh is key
to everything because, you see,
it always has to rhyme with hallelujah
...although I suppose it could be worse
(I'm sorry for a second verse)
For if this line is sung with ending "ooh you"
Well that alone is wrong, it's true,
But following the rhyme scheme through,
The verse would have to end with hallelu-you
(lol I should be asleep)